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interest of students 定 students' interest？
✗ 你會咁寫
These activities can promote the interest of students.
✓ 應該係
These activities can promote students’ interest.
「interest of students」寫成「students’ interest」會簡潔自然啲。
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點解你會咁寫
中文「學生嘅興趣」個「嘅」譯做 of 最直接，所以成篇文都係 of。英文習慣：講人或者生物用 ’s，講死物先用 of。眾數已經有 s 嘅字，撇號擺喺 s 後面。
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再睇多兩個例子
✗ The decision of the government was wrong.
✓ The government’s decision was wrong.
✗ The books of the children are missing.
✓ The children’s books are missing.
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