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hug a healthier lifestyle 係咪錯？
✗ 你會咁寫
We can inspire our generation to hug a healthier lifestyle.
✓ 應該係
We can inspire our generation to embrace a healthier lifestyle.
「hug a lifestyle」係直接由中文「擁抱生活」翻譯過嚟。英文 hug 淨係用嚟講抱住一個人或者一件實物，抽象嘅嘢要用 embrace。
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點解你會咁寫
你個腦仲喺度譯緊。中文諗好一句，再逐個字搵對應嘅英文字，就會出呢種句。搵到個 pattern 先有得改：寫完覺得「好似有啲怪」嗰啲位，通常就係。
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再睇多兩個例子
✗ Students have to pay lots of effort for preparing the exam.
✓ Students have to put a lot of effort into preparing for the exam.
✗ From the personality point of view, sports build character.
✓ From a personal development perspective, sports build character.
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